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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Danny's Poem

    You're making it so hard for me to be surprised. I can be the real me, no judgement in your eyes. Something about you makes everything seem okay I never ...

    Aug 17, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Cycle

    Wow. I'm totally speechless. That was flat out, all around amazing. Great Job. It kinda reminded my of Avril Lavigne's song, Sk8ter Boi, but thats just me. =] great job ...

    Aug 10, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Myself

    Thanks everyone! Your reviews helped me a lot, and to be honest made my day. :) Galerius- Thank you for the different view you gave me, I really would've never ...

    Aug 10, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: ShadowDance: Chapter Two

    OK, so I've read both of your chapters and I would just like to say I'm in love with your story. When you describe things, I love the feel that ...

    Aug 4, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Demon of the Sea

    I liked this a lot. As TaylaChase said, this was very formal, and I like the medieval feel to it. (If that's not what you were going for, please don't ...

    Aug 3, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: that solitary good-bye

    I really liked this. I liked how it really made you think about all the different possibilities and how it was rough around the edges instead of the usual polished ...

    Aug 2, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Run

    Run 1, 2, 3. 1, 2, 3. My feet matched the pace perfectly. I didn’t know where I was going, and it didn’t matter. I was gone. Scenery stared back ...

    Aug 2, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Tainted

    Wow. I loved it. =] Everything fit together perfectly to me. =] good job. WaterVyper really found all the little mistakes, so I can just tell you that you're a ...

    Jul 17, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: End Game

    There is no happy ending, for a broken heart. Emotional heads start spinning, you can tell no one apart. Broken mirrors greet crooked smiles, chanting escapes the corners of the ...

    Jul 15, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Whoever Told You There Was Such a Thing as a White Lie?

    Wow. This was totally incredible. Like Macs said, the emotion just rolled off of it. Your rhythm was a little sketchy, but still great. It just goes to show no ...

    Jul 8, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Love

    Love is but a wisp of the wind, gentle as a baby's touch. Wild as an unexpected sin, goals fall silent to lust. Love is but magic's true form, enticing ...

    Jul 8, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Call Me Suicidal

    Wow. I liked this so much! The way your words twisted into different meanings but you still have a slight idea of what they're really about, well, I mean I ...

    Jul 6, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Eff.

    I think people are missing the point, she wants to share her life experiences, and you can't do that by--as she said-- pleasing everyone. It's like a life Bio. except ...

    Jun 22, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Breakable - Ch. 1 (Part 1)

    OK, so I don't have very much time but I just wanted to say that I really really really LOVED it and I can't wait to read more. I'm very ...

    Jun 15, 2009
  • Romantic Novels Re: Letters Unsent Chapter 3

    And I don't want you to cry. I want you to remember my face. I need you to remember why you fell in love with me. I just want you ...

    Jun 9, 2009


not to be woke but i just can't go around eating houses
— chi